Thursday, May 30, 2013

The Sun Alien



The Sun Alien
The  sun  alien  worked  in  space   and  he wanted  to   go   to earth.
He zoomed to earth in his rocket.
“Are  you   going home?” Asked his Mum.
Yes Mum.
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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!June 4, 2013 at 6:53 PM

    Hi Brandon

    You are really starting to think more about using creative ideas in your writing. Keep this up!
    I wonder why the sun alien wanted to go to earth?

    I like how he "zoomed" to earth!
    From Mrs Natusch

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