Thursday, August 8, 2013


The BIG footprint
I was walking along the blue river and I was frightened. There was a big footprint in the sand. I covered it with soft sand. I was scared so I ran fast to my boat. I got on my boat and sailed away.


  1. Hi Brandon
    I was really impressed with your hard work in the ICT suite today. You were focused on your typing and writing and had great ideas for your story.
    You are writing more than you did at the start of the year so well done! You are achieving your goals!
    Mrs Natusch

  2. I like your adjectives that you added to your writing (the ones in red)!
    I wonder where you sailed away to?
    From Mrs N