Thursday, February 20, 2014

The house


One sparkly night I saw some people going to my house and we saw a cave under my house. Then a bird was flying in the cave and then I saw a  cave and good people saw the house and then  the trees and the people had  was the end.

5 comments:

  1. I'm wondering why do you not wear shoes during school? And enjoyed your blog loved the story!

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  2. To Brandon
    You need to make your writing make sense but good job.
    From Masyn

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  3. to brandon love your story it made sense from niall

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  4. To Brandon
    I love your story about your story but is there neey monters
    from jade

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