Thursday, September 5, 2013

suddenly I heard a crack...

Suddenly I heard a crack...
I was the wind. I was running along so fast. Suddenly I heard a crack...the ground shook. It was an earthquake. It stopped shaking I went outside.
The end.

By Brandon


  1. Hi Brandon

    I like your first sentence! You made your story really interesting.

    Miss Pethybridge

  2. To Miss Pethybridge
    I like my writing because it was
    about suddenly I heard a crack.
    by Brandon