Thursday, September 5, 2013

suddenly I heard a crack...

Suddenly I heard a crack...
I was the wind. I was running along so fast. Suddenly I heard a crack...the ground shook. It was an earthquake. It stopped shaking I went outside.
The end.

By Brandon
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  1. Miss PethybridgeSeptember 5, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    Hi Brandon

    I like your first sentence! You made your story really interesting.

    Miss Pethybridge

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  2. Powerful Learners in Room 7!September 6, 2013 at 11:52 AM

    To Miss Pethybridge
    I like my writing because it was
    about suddenly I heard a crack.
    by Brandon

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