Thursday, April 11, 2013

The tree

I  was walking  down the street  to  the tree.    I  went inside the tree there were wolfs  the floor was soft I saw some stairs I went up the stairs there was a monster I ran down the stairs and home.

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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!April 14, 2013 at 8:20 PM

    Hi Brandon
    Your story is very interesting. I like how you described the floor as soft. I hope the monster didn't follow you home!
    How did you get inside the tree?
    Mrs Natusch

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