the writing

 the amazing please in the current. in the earth rook and the hot air balloon because can go slow  a cu sell
big big big rook in the volcanoes. in the best world and big wave going to the cu sell and drake rook in the but the big stone sun and the bad course in the  big balloon near the rook because the balloon pomp the balloon in the bad rook.  and the stooge gourd in the big louver in the alien rooks and the good cars having a big rase in the pomp came to the rase and the lost of bad alien and  aliens died in war.

the end

there s a monster under my bed

On Sunday

Writing Reflection

Kapa haka

I  was in Kapa  haka  today. I learnt the haka and learnt to sing  songs .

My Audioboo

listen to ‘Brandon's mihi’ on Audioboo

Writing

The BIG footprint
I was walking along the blue river and I was frightened. There was a big footprint in the sand. I covered it with soft sand. I was scared so I ran fast to my boat. I got on my boat and sailed away.

Writing

One day the army transformer and army boat were battling . They surrounded the army and blew them up. The boat's engine exploded. The army transformers lived happily ever after.

By Brandon.

volcano

The volcano urapded and it was every where. I liked the volcano it was hot.

Matariki

Every year the Matariki stars shine. I am having a party to celebrate Matariki. To celebrate I am going to the party. I am having a sleepover. The stars are sparkling in the sky. Fireworks fly up into the air.

The Sun Alien

The Sun Alien

The  sun  alien  worked  in  space   and  he wanted  to   go   to earth.

He zoomed to earth in his rocket.

“Are  you   going home?” Asked his Mum.

Yes Mum.

The alien

I am eating food and an alien had some water. The alien was eating the food on the floor.
The alien went into his spaceship .
Then we are going in the spacehship and we went to home.

The tree

I  was walking  down the street  to  the tree.    I  went inside the tree there were wolfs  the floor was soft I saw some stairs I went up the stairs there was a monster I ran down the stairs and home.

Please make a comment about what you enjoyed about my writing.

 

My Birthday

I  like my Birthday pary and  the   birthday friends. Aaron and
  me  played connect 4. The food and the cup cakes were yummy. We
like conect 4 and we like the food. I helped the guys put the things away.